Comments on: Papang http://aboutawoman.blog.friendster.com/2007/06/papang/ Fri, 11 Dec 2009 11:30:47 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.2 By: Marvin http://aboutawoman.blog.friendster.com/2007/06/papang/#comment-2 Marvin Fri, 12 Sep 2008 15:43:53 +0000 http://aboutawoman.blog.friendster.com/2007/06/papang/#comment-2 what a melancholic piece. i actually have seen the grim realities of death on this one good soldier. it struck a chord since my father is also a soldier, and i dread the idea of him passing. the poem treads beautifully along the lines, just the right pace. and arrangement was figurative in a sense that the reader is afforded the luxury of reading it in phases. on measurable bits that aids for more internalization. a good poem with a catchy bite !! what a melancholic piece. i actually have seen the grim realities of death on this one good soldier. it struck a chord since my father is also a soldier, and i dread the idea of him passing.

the poem treads beautifully along the lines, just the right pace. and arrangement was figurative in a sense that the reader is afforded the luxury of reading it in phases. on measurable bits that aids for more internalization.

a good poem with a catchy bite !!

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